Animal Town

This week we have used another picture as motivation for our writing. We had a
story starter and then we had to carry on the story.

What I like about my writing is that it's not full spech so it sounds good.

I need to improve on putting adjectives.

Here is my writing about Animal Town. “Shreek!” “hrri, I’m raaa I stick I stick bird year!” “sorr what what you rrrrwont to dorrr?” “rrrrrok it shreek! It not talkn it not talking! I tell sherrrek! Me storey first so this is Animal Town Animal town! Shrrrrrek yourrr look newww speachs newwwww speachs, shrrrrrrek so the Animal Town you ask about ask about! This town has animals sherrrek instaid of humans humans! Their are munkys, chipmunks sand sharks, pieps, aps eagles (that’s what jaxon is), and lions and lots of other stuff other stuff. Ok rrrrok thats allllllllllllll enjoy.