Farther's Day Card

We wrote a peace about farther's day and our dads. You had to wright a few extended simalys about our dad for egsampl: my dad is as funny as a clown that's slipped over on a banana. We also had to make some pichers to go with it. Here's mine.

Environmental Writing

We did environmental writing based on the Kauri trees. We had to sketch the Kauri in our school and then write a poem about it. Here's mine.

Animal Town

This week we have used another picture as motivation for our writing. We had a
story starter and then we had to carry on the story.

What I like about my writing is that it's not full spech so it sounds good.

I need to improve on putting adjectives.

Here is my writing about Animal Town. “Shreek!” “hrri, I’m raaa I stick I stick bird year!” “sorr what what you rrrrwont to dorrr?” “rrrrrok it shreek! It not talkn it not talking! I tell sherrrek! Me storey first so this is Animal Town Animal town! Shrrrrrek yourrr look newww speachs newwwww speachs, shrrrrrrek so the Animal Town you ask about ask about! This town has animals sherrrek instaid of humans humans! Their are munkys, chipmunks sand sharks, pieps, aps eagles (that’s what jaxon is), and lions and lots of other stuff other stuff. Ok rrrrok thats allllllllllllll enjoy.

The Balloon Race

This week we have used a picture as motivation for our writing. We had a story starter and then we had to carry on the story. What I like about my writing is writing I need to improve on  fullstots We also made a google draw showing the things that we would take with us in our hot air balloon.

After all the months of preparation and building excitement the big day had finally arrived. In unison, the balloons all took off into the air, leaving the cheering crowd far below, gasping at the magnificent spectacle.

A difficult journey lay ahead, and surely not all of the balloons would make it, but they had to try – the prize of $1,000,000 for the first crew to make it around the world was a great incentive…

So we’re in the air the two men soaring in the sky. “The more air we gain, the less we’ll have to worry about,” said John. “But the longer to fall,” mumbled Radergas. Still John had a point and plus, John had the most experience with flying as he was the first one to fly to the moon and he still flies planes.

With John’s knowledge and Radergas’ determination they were making it far past the other balloons, so they decided to stop at the Statue Of Liberty, the first landmark on the list.

It was about a days flying and they would make it by the afternoon. So after a long session of telling each other off and complaining about a variety of things from time to time, they had finally made it the Statue Of Liberty towering above them they slowly descended to a bit of grass that was meant for the balloons to land on.

After ten minutes, they had something to eat, went to the toilet, and grabbed the landmark piece of wood that proved they had been their. They set off again as the sun came down. They planned a route and decided that John should do the first night and Radergas would do the next.

As the week passed, they became faster and faster, and more and more use to each other but the real adventure is crossing the whole world. They mistake the St Basil's cathedral for St Basil's castle and called it the Castle of Herbs.

They thought they had to climb to the great sphinx of Giza and then found out that is was just on the back and as they flew past the Giza pyramids they scraped on the bottom of one.

When they got to the little mermaid, they swam out to the rock and the post had washed away so they used a giant cat's eye shell to make proof.

At The Palace of Versailles, they found that the post was the treasure of a treasure hunt so they had to do it.

At Taj Mahal they wasted a lot of time because they weren't allowed to get the post until they pronounced its name right.

Next was Machu Picchu where they could not figure out where to land then there was Big Ben, that's when they found out that their cell phones had the wrong time (or the other way around).

Next is Burj Al Arab. Radergas had to go down on a ladder to retrieve the post. When they left Acropolis of Athens the balloon fire nearly ran out.

At Stonehenge, one of the rocks nearly fell on top of them. They decided to skip St. Peter’s Basilica because it was too crumbled to oblivion.

Car-Makerspace

We read if I built a car. It was about a boy that explained how he would make a car. We had to write a story about what we would do if we built a car. I made a presentation about my car, here it is. 

Pou writing

As part of our writing programme we have been doing environmental writing. We had to sketch an object and as we were sketching we wrote down thoughts that we had. Then we wrote our thoughts down  as a poem. We cut out the sketch and added this to our writing.

Makerspace

In Maker-space* we have been doing Autumn activities. I went to the Lego room and made some trees. Here it is.
*Maker-space is a group that goes into room three and does creative, makey things using science, maths, technology, art and engineering. 

I wrote a poem about Autumn Trees.

Leaves falling, trees swaying, a forest of fire. Orange leaves and dark rich brown wood. A orchestra of birds, a swarm of butterflies flying. It's like heaven.  

My Mum

This week in Writing we wrote about how special our mums are. Here is my published writing about my wonderful mum. Happy Mother’s Day!

ANZAC Day Writing

We wrote letters and poems for ANZAC day.

Here is my letter.

The Beach

We where Laring to use capital letters curectly

On
Wednesday

we went to the

beach. As I caught my first

glimpse of the water I was stunned. It was as flat

as a fritter squashed by the sky tower. I leapt

out of the car before face planting into the sand but that didn’t stop me. I got
up dived into the sparkling water.
It was awesome.

Skittles

In our skittles writing we have been how to show not tell witch is when you have to describe the senses, not telling them. I need to work on adding punctuation. I am good at including adjectives in my writing.

What Am I?

We made kites. First we made the frame. Next we laid the newspaper on the frame. Finally we stuck all of the pieces together and then you have a kite.

What is turn, flip, and slide.

we have been learning about translation reflection and rotation l made a a drawing to show what they mean

 

Animal report

This is my animal report picture. We used our writing to create a picture, this is mine. It is about jellyfish.

Meerkats report

Silly Sentences

We have been learning how to write correct sentences.
A sentence makes sense on it's own and usually has one simple idea or piece of information. A simple sentence needs a subject and a verb. It needs a capital letter and
a full stop.
We wrote silly sentences. Here is one I illustrated.

Holiday Recount

Here is my holiday recount.

The Zoo

“Ohhhhh!! When are we going to get  there?” I said. “We’re already there,” said Nana. “Oh!” I said. We walked into the zoo and got a map. “Where should we go first?” I asked. “Let's go to the desert land,” said Nana. “Then we can go around this way,” I said. “Here are the zebras, giraffes and ostriches,” announced grandad.

“Wow!!” I said. “Next along here is the meerkats and parrots.”

“Here are the lions they’re so fierce and amazing!!!!” I said.

“Cool and here are rhinos and gazelles and they can jump 2 meters.” “Where are the meerkats aren't they meant to be here?” “Yes,” said Nana,” but they have moved.” “And look!!” I say, “the red panda!!” We saw the elephants and flamingos (and the ice cream store) but the flamingos are white. “Here come on,” said Harvey.  

School Triathlon

“Yes!!” I said as we start the triathlon. As I wait in line I think about the track once, just to make sure that I don’t go off track.

Finally it was my turn. As I walked to the pool I stared at the crystal clear water. It looked cold and endless. Ok, I thought maybe it is a bit cold. When I sat on the side I put my foot in. Brrrrrrrrr! That is cold. “Go!!” says the teacher. I shivered once and then dived in. Now that I was in it felt a bit warmer. But that’s no reason to stop. I kept on going but it did get a bit tiring. After the swim it was time for the bike. I ran to get my helmet. Once I got it, it was time to start biking. Creak!! went the bike as I wheeled it to the track and started to ride. Ohhhhhhhhhhhh!!! The triathlon was a bit hard but I still kept on going.

Finally I reached the finish of the biking and by then l had started panting. I still had to do the run. I headed out to the transition area and ran. I ran all the way to the finish line.